Oceans of Venus - A 100 Word Story
June 07, 2011 flash fictionYup, it's flash fiction time again! As always, this is based around Laurence Simon's weekly challenge for the 100 word-stories podcast. It's a great exercise for writers - writing a good drabble is a lot harder than it appears, but is still a "small" task so you can get around that idea of it being too much work. And then you get a random (and often bizarre) writing prompt to shoehorn you out of writer's block! Go read the rules for the Weekly Challenge and participate!
The player below should have the audio for this week; if it doesn't, you can find the audio here to download. You can also read and hear the rest of the entries (and vote for your favorites) at the 100 Word Stories podcast site!
The oceans of Venus slip over my head. Finally, I can breathe properly again.
Raina slides into the thick atmosphere to my right. Her shape, like mine, resembles the long cylinder of a porpoise. Radar and telemetry keep us together despite the waves and currents of the thick atmosphere. I remember the fiction of my father's youth.
"It's like the orbital elevator ships are fishing," I commoed.
Her right eye fixes on me. "The only thing to fish for in this hellhole is us." A flick of her tail sends her toward base.
I still watch out for Venusian kraken.