Future Visions of Relationships Past - A 100 Word Story
June 15, 2011 flash fictionYup, it's flash fiction time again! As always, this is based around Laurence Simon's weekly challenge for the 100 word-stories podcast. It's a great exercise for writers - writing a good drabble is a lot harder than it appears, but is still a "small" task so you can get around that idea of it being too much work. And then you get a random (and often bizarre) writing prompt to shoehorn you out of writer's block! Go read the rules for the Weekly Challenge and participate!
The player below should have the audio for this week; if it doesn't, you can find the audio here to download. You can also read and hear the rest of the entries (and vote for your favorites) at the 100 Word Stories podcast site!
Future Visions of Relationships Past
You'll come home after a long day. A day spent trying to forget the things you'd said the night before. A day spent remembering the hateful words your lover said.
Those surprising, unexpected words, like uncorking Chianti and finding frothing sour vinegar boiling out of the narrow throat.
Of course there's problems, you'll rehearse, opening the door, but we can--
The first splash of acid - or maybe for you it's a gun, or a knife, or an iron, or a bat - takes you unprepared.
Great minds think alike, you'll muse as your lover purges the toxic relationship from their life.